Tag: Young Adult

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Book: “The Last Bloodcarver” by Vanessa Le

Publishing Info: Roaring Brook Press, March 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: NetGalley

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: Nhika is a bloodcarver. A cold-hearted, ruthless being who can alter human biology with just a touch. In the industrial city of Theumas, she is seen not as a healer, but a monster that kills for pleasure.

When Nhika is caught using her bloodcarving abilities during a sham medical appointment, she’s captured by underground thugs and sold to an aristocratic family to heal the last witness of their father’s murder.

But as Nhika delves deeper into their investigation amidst the glitz of Theumas’ wealthiest district, she begins to notice parallels between this job and her own dark past. And when she meets an alluring yet entitled physician’s aide, Ven Kochin, she’s forced to question the true intent behind this murder. In a society that outcasts her, Kochin seems drawn to her…though he takes every chance he gets to push her out of his opulent world.

When Nhika discovers that Kochin is not who he claims to be, and that there is an evil dwelling in Theumas that runs much deeper than the murder of one man, she must decide where her heart, and her allegiance, truly lie. And – if she’s willing to become the dreaded bloodcarver Theumas fears to save herself and the ones she’s vowed to protect.

Review: I feel like there’s been a lot of exciting new Asian fantasy stories coming out this spring, and this one was definitely high on my TBR list, as I’m even less familiar with Vietnamese mythology than Chinese, Japanes, or Korean. The cover art is also very unique and intriguing, and I thought the main character’s magical trait of manipulating human biology had a lot of promise. I also love murder mysteries, so I was excited to see how well these two genres would be blended together. And, well, it was all pretty good!

What first stood out to me was the lush and descriptive style of writing the author employed. The story starts out fairly quickly as far as plot and pacing go, but I was still able to picture the details of this world and character. This felt like a fully realized, fully peopled fantasy world, complete with a culture that felt distinctive and elaborate. Of course, central to the story were Nhika’s bloodcarving abilities, and this detailed style of writing helped to truly flesh out how this power worked. Many fantasy stories devolve to fairly simplistic explanations of their magical elements, but here I felt like we were given a true insiders-look into Nhika’s magic. This felt important as it helped the reader understand why an ability that could be so useful to humanity could also be seen as something to fear and hate.

I also really liked Nhika’s character and the arc she has in this book. Through her eyes, we see the experiences of a diaspora character, a young woman who finds herself in a world that no longer feels like her own. Even more interesting, her experiences as an outsider who does not fit within this world were mirrored in the other main character Kochin who experiences a similar disconnect. But while this disconnection and “out-of-place-ness” might be similar between them, their experiences and views of how they fit (or don’t fit) within this world are very different.

That said, this is one of those rare circumstances where I feel like the story might have been better without any romance at all. I liked both of these characters, but frankly, by the time the romance really started to amp up, I’d forgotten that was even the direction it was heading. These two were very definitely enemies for much of the time, so the change of tone when it came, did feel a bit strange. It was also rather sudden, not feeling nearly as developed as many of the other aspects of the story.

Overall, this was a great debut novel! I had some quibbles here and there with the way the romance was developed, but the writing and world-building were strong and promise of great things to come from this author in the future!

Rating 8: Rich and vivid worldbuilding combined with a compelling vision of the diaspora experience created a fantastic debut all around!

Reader’s Advisory:

“The Last Bloodcarver” can be found on these Goodreads lists: Around The World 2024 – Asia Continent and Asian SSF.

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Book: “The Encanto’s Daughter” by Melissa de la Cruz

Publishing Info: G.P. Putnam’s Sons Books for Young Readers, March 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: NetGalley

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: A young woman claims the throne of a realm inspired by Filipino mythology in this YA romantic fantasy, the first in an enchanting new duet by #1 New York Times bestselling author Melissa de la Cruz.

MJ Rodriguez has spent her life hiding in the human world, keeping a heavy secret. She’s half-encanto. As the only child of King Vivencio of the Sirena Court, she’s also next in line for the throne. And now, upon her estranged father’s sudden death, MJ must claim her place as rightful heir.

In wondrous Biringan, the road to the throne is paved with thorns. Without a reigning monarch, the realm has spiraled into disarray. MJ has to win over a backstabbing council that objects to a half-human ruler. And when it looks like her father’s passing wasn’t natural but possibly inflicted by a curse, she must hunt down the sorceress behind this merciless magic.

In a bind, MJ forges an unlikely alliance with the striking Sir Lucas of the feared Sigbin Court, and soon, she loses her heart to the mysterious knight. But with peril looming over Biringan, the princess must decide if she can both open herself to love and carry the weight of the crown.

Review: So, I’m going to just say this up front: I mistook this author for another “Melissa” author when I initially requested this book on NetGalley. I’ve only read one other book by de la Cruz, and to say it wasn’t a favorite is probably an over-statement. I think it might be one of my lowest rated books on the blog, actually. That said, even after I realized, I still wanted to give this one a shot. Over the last year or so, I can think of a few examples where I’ve really loved books by authors who didn’t work for me the first time around. So, who knows? This could have been another situation where, with a new project, my mind could be changed.

All of that nice intro just to find out…nope, turns out everything that I disliked about the first de la Cruz book was more a feature of her writing than a bug. Ah, well, worth the shot I guess! But, as always, let’s talk a bit at first about the things that did work for me. Really, not much did. But I can see more where things would work for other readers whose tastes differ from mine. I did like the elements that were drawn from Filipino mythology (I especially appreciated the author’s note about this), and I wish there had been even more of these elements included on the whole. By the end, I still felt like we’d only scratched the surface of what could have been a rich fantasy tapestry. I also think that many of the choices made with regards to characterization and plot will appeal more to younger YA readers, so they may find more to like in this book than I did.

But for me, this was really a disaster of a read. Both the characters and the plot felt like cardboard cut outs of the most stereotypical elements of storytelling that on could cobble together. From the ridiculousness of the “magical royal school” setting, to the plot quickly devolving from MJ taking seriously her task to learn to take the throne in only a month’s time to instead partaking in juvenile bickering and drama. And to people these scenes, we have all of the stereotypes you can imagine: quirky best friend? Check. Mysterious romantic interest? Check. Hot girl that the main girl must hate? Check. This last one was most disappointing to see. I vaguely remember having problems with this in the other book by de la Cruz I read, this propensity to making the main female character seem special by degrading the other women around her. It was distasteful then, and it’s pretty depressing to still see it popping up here in YA fiction years later.

Beyond this, it felt like the book didn’t know what it wanted to be. You have, of course, the boarding school aspect. But the story also has elements of a fantasy thriller and then a murder mystery is introduced. And yet, even with all of these elements, I found myself so, so bored while reading this. Not being able to connect to any of the characters is always an uphill battle as far as engagement with a book goes, but it also felt like the pacing of this one was simply very slow. It felt like nothing was really happening for large chunks of the story. And as it went, it was easy to guess exactly where every plot line was going which sucked any tension out of the experience. And then we get to the end and what do we get? A cliffhanger!

I really disliked this book. The writing felt limited, the plotting was questionable, and the characterization could be reduced to stereotypes. All of that said, I know this author is popular with a lot of readers, so if you’re a fan of her previous books, take all of this with a massive grain of salt. Also, if you’re very dedicated to checking out a book that draws from Filipino mythology this might be worth a shot, though, I have to say, I feel like there have to be better examples out there than this. Overall, while I’m glad I gave this author another shot in the service of not having fixed opinions of an author based on one reading experience, after finishing this one, I’ll think I’ll call it quits.

Rating 5: At best it doesn’t stand out from the pack of other YA fantasy stories, and at worst, it’s a muddled mess of stereotypes and predictable plot lines.

Reader’s Advisory:

“The Encanto’s Daughter” can be found on this Goodreads list: Asian YA/NA Books 2024:

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Book: “A Tempest of Tea” by Hafsah Faizal

Publishing Info: Farrar, Straus & Giroux, February 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: Edelweiss+

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: On the streets of White Roaring, Arthie Casimir is a criminal mastermind and collector of secrets. Her prestigious tearoom transforms into an illegal bloodhouse by dark, catering to the vampires feared by society. But when her establishment is threatened, Arthie is forced to strike an unlikely deal with an alluring adversary to save it—and she can’t do the job alone.

Calling upon a band of misfits, Arthie formulates a plan to infiltrate the dark and glittering vampire society known as the Athereum. But not every member of her crew is on her side, and as the truth behind the heist unfolds, Arthie finds herself in the midst of a conspiracy that will threaten the world as she knows it. Dark, action-packed, and swoonworthy, this is Hafsah Faizal better than ever.

Review: Yet another book that is promoted as a “Six of Crows” read-alike! And, spoiling my own review, I will say that this is one of the few of these books that I’ve read recently where that comparison does seem to hold true! I hadn’t read any other books by this author, but I do know that other readers very much enjoyed her other fantasy series, so I was excited to see what all the fuss was about on that front, too. There were a few things that I think could have improved this read, overall, but it was also such a fun time that I mostly didn’t mind!

But let’s start out with the unequivocally good parts of the book. The story was definitely at its most successful during its main character’s, Arthie’s, POV chapters. And, really, if you have the main character right, you’re already mostly there as far as a good reading experience goes! This is also where the book most resembles “Six of Crows.” Arthie reads as a very similar character to Kaz from that duology. Both are morally grey characters with dark histories that are slowly revealed as the story unspools. And in both cases, morally grey means, you know, actually morally grey. In that Arthie can be manipulative, cold-hearted, and single-mindedly focused on her own goals in spite of others.

But also like Kaz, she is supremely loyal to those she cares about, in this case, her chosen brother, Jin. As I’ll get into, I think the romances were the weakest points of this book. In counterbalance, this sibling relationship between Arthie and Jin was the true heart of the story. Through Jin’s perspective as well, we see how these two characters have essentially re-constructed their lives around one another and their shared goals. As the story unfolds, this relationship is tested and pushed, and much of the stakes regarding their character arcs came down to this counterbalance of trust and secrets.

The world-building was also interesting, with a unique take on vampires and half-vampires, essentially. Some of the details about these beings, and about the world itself, were delivered in a bit of a ham fisted, expositional manner early in the book, but as the book continued, I was pleased to see this tendency smoothing out. I liked the general themes that explored colonialism and imperialism, but, again, I wish at times there had been a bit more subtlety in some of this messaging. Our characters’ stories speak for themselves, and I wish authors would trust readers to draw the correct conclusions without having characters just outright say some of these points.

The plotting was also good, though the story does take a bit to really get going. There’s a lot of planning that goes into the heist itself, and then when it all actually goes down, we find that that’s not even the true peak of the conflict. Instead, the last 25% of the book really sweeps the reader up into a rush of action, reveals, and numerous twists and turns. I was able to predict a few of these switches and turns, but I was also honestly surprised by others, which is always refreshing.

I will say, however, that the book is let down by its romances, both the unfortunate love triangle that is set up for Arthie, and also Jin’s more straight-forward romance with the third POV character, Flick. This was frustrating because I feel like a few adjustments to these romances would have easily elevated this book to a truly excellent level.

First off, Flick didn’t need a POV of her own. Her story had a few interesting moments, but it all could also have been explored through Jin’s perspective and his burgeoning relationship with Flick. Not only would this then allow Jin and Arthie to have more page time, as the true main characters, but by pushing Flick’s development to character interactions with others, we’d actually have better relationship building between her and Jin on the page. As it stands, the reader is mostly just told that Jin and Flick have this burgeoning relationship, but we barely see them truly interact or speak to each other.

And then with Arthie, do away with the love triangle all together. As it stands, it feels like this book spent almost the entire time building up one side of this relationship, only to pull the rug out and point to the other relationship as the end game on literally the very last page. Which, frankly, is a waste of the reader’s time and energy. Arthie is such a great character as it is, and her history and relationship with Jin was more than enough to ground her story in an interesting arc. We could have had small teases of a relationship in her future, but we didn’t actually need anything in this book. As it stands, because there are three POVs and then two love interests for Arthie, her page time is so reduced with each of these romantic options that there’s no opportunity for anyone’s interest in one another other to be more than pure lust-at-first-sight. Which…does not make a compelling love story for any of them.

So, that’s how I’d move this book from an 8 to a 10: remove Flick’s POV, get rid of the love triangle, limit Arthie’s “romance” to more hints of a future plot point, and spend the increased page time (without Flick’s POV) to further build on the Arthie/Jin sibling bond, which is clearly the true heart of this first book, regardless of what comes next. Fixed it! As it stands, however, I still very much enjoyed this book. Arthie was a fantastic character, not only in her own POV chapters but as we see her through other character’s eyes, and the plot and final action of the book perfectly primed me to want to jump into the next book. If you’re looking for a fun, fantasy heist book, this is definitely one to check out!

Rating 8: Some adjustments to the romances may have improved it, but this was a still a romp of a fantasy heist ride that is sure to please fans of “Six of Crows!”

Reader’s Advisory:

“A Tempest of Tea” can be found on this Goodreads list: Some of the Most Interesting Covers

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Book: “Heartless Hunter” by Kristen Ciccarelli

Publishing Info: Wednesday Books, February 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from the publisher!

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: On the night Rune’s life changed forever, blood ran in the streets. Now, in the aftermath of a devastating revolution, witches have been diminished from powerful rulers to outcasts ruthlessly hunted due to their waning magic, and Rune must hide what she is.

Spending her days pretending to be nothing more than a vapid young socialite, Rune spends her nights as the Crimson Moth, a witch vigilante who rescues her kind from being purged. When a rescue goes wrong, she decides to throw the witch hunters off her scent and gain the intel she desperately needs by courting the handsome Gideon Sharpe – a notorious and unforgiving witch hunter loyal to the revolution – who she can’t help but find herself falling for.

Gideon loathes the decadence and superficiality Rune represents, but when he learns the Crimson Moth has been using Rune’s merchant ships to smuggle renegade witches out of the republic, he inserts himself into her social circles by pretending to court her right back. He soon realizes that beneath her beauty and shallow façade, is someone fiercely intelligent and tender who feels like his perfect match. Except, what if she’s the very villain he’s been hunting?

Review: I debated requesting this book for a while. This author has been very hit and miss for me in the past. While I struggled a bit with the first book I read by her (“The Last Nimsara”), I barely managed to not DNF the second book in the trilogy (“The Caged Queen”) and never even bothered with the third one. That said, I do remember thinking that the overall quality of writing was high and that the characters, especially in the first book, were fairly good. Those are two pretty foundational aspects of storytelling, so if an author has those in hand, I always feel like there’s a decent chance that a book by them will work for me. But, while this book didn’t sink to the lows of “The Caged Queen,” it also didn’t change my opinion massively about this author. Let’s get into the details!

I’m going to start off with a point that may at first seem tangential, but I swear, I have a point. A few weeks ago, a reader left a comment on one of my more negative reviews expressing relief that they had passed on the book in question. Specifically, they mentioned being glad that they have a fairly thorough vetting process before accepting books for review. Now, I also vet my book choices, trying to balance what I prefer in my own read alongside trying to cover the books that I know many people are interested in and those for which they may appreciate having reviews that provide some insights. And there’s a whole debate going on currently about how much or little publishers/marketers should rely on tropes when advertising their books. You can definitely see where publishers are falling into the trap that a popular trope is all you need to make a popular book. But, for this kind of vetting process, some basic tropes up front can be very helpful in either grabbing my attention or warning me away. And (finally, my point) this book failed to mention anywhere in its book description that the love stories is not only a love triangle, but a love triangle with two brothers as the options. *sigh* Frankly, if I had know that, I could have steered clear.

I won’t go on and on about the love triangle itself, but I always find the whole “brothers” thing kind of icky in a love triangle. Add on that it’s barely a love triangle since once of the love interests has a POV and the other doesn’t, so you always know which way this is going. And it’s all the more frustrating when the one who is the (of course) enemy is set up as this great love, and the other is the solid guy who’s been Rune’s friend and support system for years. You know, helping her, keeping her secrets…not trying to genocide her people like certain (oh so hot) other brothers.

Anyways, that last point gets to one of my main struggles with this book: the characters. For one thing, it falls into the trap that I find all too often in YA where its main characters have to be teenagers for it to be YA, but the things they’ve accomplished already in life are so incredibly unbelievable in the time they’ve had to do them that my suspension of disbelieve is immediately and thoroughly broken right from the start. Why oh why can’t authors just age up their characters to their early to mid 20s, call it a NA book, and probably get the exact same readership out of their book, but at least now it’s all plausible? I honestly don’t understand it.

I also just didn’t buy the primary “love story” between Rune and Gideon. I’ve read other witch/witch hunter love stories, and there have been some that definitely prove this set up can work. But for me to buy any burgeoning love story, the witch hunter has to have a pretty serious change of heart and regret sequence. But…Gideon just seemed fine with his choices of genocide? Because he had been hurt by a witch? It read as strange, and, more over, it really made me struggle to understand Rune’s willingness to overlook the realities of this guy she was becoming so interested in.

The book also tackles some fairly serious topics about sexual assault, and I’m not sure how well it was handled. I don’t really feel that the book gave this serious topic the framing it needed to be useful. Instead, it felt more like shock value and as a way to justify the things that the characters were thinking and doing. The seriousness of this subject also paired strangely with some of the “Bridgerton”-like aspects of the story, when the book would switch into “society mode” with a strong focus on fashion and gossip. And, look, I enjoy “Bridgeton” and enjoy a good “fantasy of manners” as much (if not more!) than the next person, but it paired very strangely with some of the darker tones of this book.

Overall, I struggled to enjoy this one. Again, the writing itself was strong enough, but the author makes choices with her characters, especially with their romances, that just don’t work for me. However, that said, I do think there are a decent number of readers who will enjoy this one, especially if you’re a fan of this author’s previous work. And, I do think this is a case where the use of tropes in the book description might have helped get this in the right readers’ hands, as well as changing it from YA (why?!?!?) to NA.

Rating 7: For me, this was a 6, but I’ll admit this came down to some very specific preferences of my own. Readers who have a more flexible approach to their romances may enjoy this one!

Reader’s Advisory:

“Heartless Hunter” can be found on these Goodreads lists: Fantasy Romance and Female fantasy authors – Children’s, YA and adult.

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Book: “Sun of Blood and Ruin” by Mariely Lares

Publishing Info: Harper Voyager, February 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from the publisher!

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: In sixteenth-century New Spain, witchcraft is punishable by death, indigenous temples have been destroyed, and tales of mythical creatures that once roamed the land have become whispers in the night. Hidden behind a mask, Pantera uses her magic and legendary swordplay skills to fight the tyranny of Spanish rule.

To all who know her, Leonora de Las Casas Tlazohtzin never leaves the palace and is promised to the heir of the Spanish throne. The respectable, law-abiding Lady Leonora faints at the sight of blood and would rather be caught dead than meddle in court affairs.

No one suspects that Leonora and Pantera are the same person. Leonora’s charade is tragically good, and with magic running through her veins, she is nearly invincible. Nearly. Despite her mastery, she is destined to die young in battle, as predicted by a seer.

When an ancient prophecy of destruction threatens to come true, Leonora–and therefore Pantera–is forced to decide: surrender the mask or fight to the end. Knowing she is doomed to a short life, she is tempted to take the former option. But the legendary Pantera is destined for more than an early grave, and once she discovers the truth of her origins, not even death will stop her.

Review: So, I went into this one with some trepidation. On one hand, I love the idea of a fantasy re-imaging of “Zorro” with a gender-swapped main character and taking place during the 16th century in the Spanish-colonized part of Mexico. So many parts of that premise have me interested, and, as a massive “Zorro” fan, I’ve been looking for a great version of this story for ages and have yet to find one. But on the other hand, this is one of those examples of a book that definitely suffers from its publication date. In that, it was published several months ago in the U.K. and picked up by various book boxes since then. That being the case, there are a ton of reviews available with readers thoughts on the book. And, unfortunately, they’re largely middling. However, given how excited I was initially and the fact that I often find myself disagreeing with the prevailing take, I still wanted to give this one a shot.

So, right away, I can understand why this book was a struggle for many readers. And while, as you’ll see from my rating, I largely agreed with the general consensus of this book, there are a few points that didn’t work for others that bothered me less. First of all, the book starts out in a very disjointed manner, with lots of jumps in time from the present day and then back in time Leonora’s days training in the jungle. I have no problem being plopped down in books like this, with very little information to start with, but it is a problem point for many readers. I will say, that while this basic structure wasn’t a problem for me, the overall execution of it was not the best. The way it was done severely impacted the pacing of the story, preventing me from connecting with the characters or really finding as solid footing in this world.

This was made more difficult by the need to rather regularly check the glossary at the back of the book to understand what was actually being discussed at times. Here, again, I like glossaries for the most part, but in general, I feel like they should support the story, rather than being required for basic comprehension of plot points of the story. This wasn’t helped by the fact that this is a very political book. I do like political stories, and, knowing less about this particular region and time period, I went into this one excited to learn more. However, again, the actual plotting and progression of the story that explored these ideas was so disjointed that it made the reading experience itself a challenge, and it wasn’t until the mid-point of the story that I really began to place how everyone was interacting with one another.

On top of this, I was disappointed in the “Zorro” aspects of the story. For all that we’re told that the Pantera is this badass vigilante, we get to see very little of this on the page. I was interested in the politics, sure, but I’m a simple woman at heart: I just wanted a bunch of badass Zorro/Pantera fight scenes, and I felt like that was severely lacking.

The writing, overall, was ok. I think the author had more success with her world-building and descriptive prose, however, than with the dialogue. Much of the latter felt stilted and scripted in a way that constantly took me out of the story. This wasn’t helped by the fact that I wasn’t super invested in the heroine or her love interest. There wasn’t anything actively bad about either of these characters, but I also simply didn’t care about their stories or their romance.

Overall, unfortunately, I have to agree that the general consensus for this book was largely right. Perhaps it will find its place with readers who are more interested in a political fantasy story than a “Zorro” story and who aren’t thrown by the slow start. But, sadly, my search for the definitive “Zorro” book continues.

Rating 6: Kind of a mess, with a plot that was all over the place and a main character who spent a lot of time telling us about being a badass vigilante, but less time showing us.

Reader’s Advisory:

“Sun of Blood and Ruin” can be found on these Goodreads lists: Historical Fiction 2024 and 2023 Debuts.

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Book: “Infinity Alchemist” by Kacen Callender

Publishing Info: Tor Teen, February 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from the publisher!

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: For Ash Woods, practicing alchemy is a crime.

Only an elite few are legally permitted to study the science of magic―so when Ash is rejected by the Lancaster Mage’s College, he takes a job as the school’s groundskeeper instead, forced to learn alchemy in secret.

When he’s discovered by the condescending and brilliant apprentice Ramsay Thorne, Ash is sure he’s about to be arrested―but instead of calling the reds, Ramsay surprises Ash by making him an offer: Ramsay will keep Ash’s secret if he helps her find the legendary Book of Source, a sacred text that gives its reader extraordinary power.

As Ash and Ramsay work together and their feelings for each other grow, Ash discovers their mission is more dangerous than he imagined, pitting them against influential and powerful alchemists―Ash’s estranged father included. Ash’s journey takes him through the cities and wilds across New Anglia, forcing him to discover his own definition of true power and how far he and other alchemists will go to seize it.

Review: While I hadn’t read any other books by this author, I was aware that he had written a good number of books before this one and was generally quite enjoyed! So I jumped at the opportunity to see what types of books he had in store! Plus, I’m always down for a good alchemist story! Unfortunately, however, I really struggled to enjoy this one. But, as always, let’s start with a few things I did enjoy!

While heavy-handed at times, I enjoyed the world-building and society that this book presented and the ways in which the author used these fantastical features to make commentary on the real world struggles and prejudices that people may face. I wouldn’t say any of it was particularly subtle or ground-breaking, but it also got the job done, and I think readers who enjoy a good social commentary built into their fantasy novel will likely enjoy this aspect of the story. I also enjoyed the unique take on the magic system, in which everyone is capable of alchemy since it pulls from one’s life force, but use of this magic is still heavily regulated and licensed. It sets up a good foundation for our main character, a young man who practices alchemy in secret.

But while this premise is good, I found myself really disliking Ash throughout much of this book. Yes, it is YA and Ash is young and thus somewhat excused for bursts of emotion, but this character really took it to new levels. He would react so explosively to situations that it was immediately off-putting, especially given how often these reactions placed him and his friends in more danger. At a certain point, “fiery” becomes just plain dumb and unfortunately, Ash crossed this line more than once. And then he’d swing wildly back to swooning over love interests the very next moment.

And this got to another struggle point: love interests, plural. As far as my romance preferences go, throuple stories are fairly low in my interest. For me, they’re like love triangles that just…continue. And all of the struggles I have with love triangles then just…continue. In that I often don’t feel like enough has been done to build up actual relationships between all three of the characters and everything quickly begins to feel superficial and like instalove (more really, instalust, given the lack of time/development given to these relationships). Such was the case here. On one hand, this is on me. If I had dug a bit deeper, I may have just passed on this book, knowing that I’m not going to be the best reader for it. But on the other hand, objectively, I do think these relationships are lacking in any real substance, unfortunately.

And, lastly, I do have to touch on some readability issues. One of Ash’s love interests is a character named Ramsey who is genderfluid. This is then expressed on page by switching the pronouns from “they” to “him” between chapters. I’m not sure what the solution is to writing these types of characters, but this approach really left me struggling and more often than not pulled me out of the story while I re-read sentences to find the context that might clue me in on who the “he” was at any given moment. Given that the character also used “they,” it might have been best to just leave it at that. I’m not sure if switching pronouns between chapters served any real purpose, narratively, and, for me at least, it took me out of the book enough times to severely disrupt my reading experience, from a practical point.

Over all, I really struggled with this book. While there is a lot of action on the page, I felt disconnected from all of the characters and had a hard time maintaining interest in their stories. Fantasy readers who enjoy throuple stories and are looking for a good fantasy world with social commentary built in nicely may want to check this out. But I do think there are better books out there with all of these things.

Rating 6: A dislike of the main character and a struggle with some of the writing mechanics left this one as a bit of a downer for me.

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“Infinity Alchemist” can be found on this list: 2024 Dark Academia Releases.