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Book: “The Curse of Sins” by Kate Dramis

Publishing Info: Sourcebooks Casablanca, June 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from the publisher!

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Book Description: After discovering she’s prophesied to save the realm, Aya’s duty should be clear: return home with once-sworn enemy Will to serve their queen in the coming war against a rival kingdom…one whose pursuit of dark magic could bring the realm to its knees.

But with part of the prophecy still undiscovered, and their queen’s intentions increasingly suspect, Aya’s very purpose is quickly brought into question. With betrayal lurking around every corner, she and Will are forced to lie, manipulate, and hide what they’ve become to one another as they struggle to learn the truth before dark magic destroys them all.

And with secrets and lies trailing Aya wherever she goes, she has to wonder…do the gods truly want her to save the realm…or simply watch it burn?

Previously Review: “The Curse of Saints”

Review: So, if you go back and read my review of the first book, you’ll see that I gave it a fairly middling review. That said, I distinctly remember filing this one in the “circle back around to” category in my head. Yes, I struggled with aspects of the first book, but I also remembered enjoying the world-building and the bare bones of the characters. I also had high hopes that now that the initial work had been done to introduce these characters and this world, the second installment would be freed up to tell a more complete and satisfying story. So, I requested this sequel. Alas, in this particular case, all of this strategizing was for not, and I ended up just as (in fact, even more!) frustrated with this second outing than I was with the first.

We always try to start with positives with our reviews, even the more negative ones. But I’ve got to say, it’s a bit of a struggle with this one. Essentially, every single thing that bothered me about the first book was present again here, except somehow, now even worse. That being the case, I guess a positive would be that if you enjoyed the first one, you’ll probably like this one! They are very similar, and if you enjoyed the angstiness of the characters, the long page length, and the arbitrary feel to whether or not certain story elements were crucial to the plot, well…you’ll like this one too! Also, if you like the “misunderstanding” trope in romances, than you’ll enjoy this love story a heck of a lot more than I did. I’ll also add that I don’t think the author’s writing style is bad. She can string together some very nice turns of phrase, and, again, I do think there are a lot of interesting ideas and world-building that went into this series. That said, things are never really pulled together in a coherent manner.

One of the things that annoyed me the most in the first book was the flip/flop relationship between Aya and Will, with them trusting one another one moment, then, bizarrely, swinging the complete other direction and keeping massive secrets from one another (at best!) or trying to kill one another again (at worst!). I was hopeful going into this book that we would leave this element behind. After all, there were some large reveals at the end of the first book, and the characters had, seemingly, grown over the course of that book. So, imagine my dismay when I cracked this one open and found even more of the same! C’mon now! At points it was so bad that it felt like the author was having to manually get into the story and rewind her own characters’ growth and arcs in completely unnatural ways just to increase the “drama” and brooding of it all. When I see this in a book, I begin to question whether the author really has a steady hand on the characters at all. Is there an inability to write them in any other way? Do they have no other inner lives to speak of? I can’t emphasize enough how frustrating it was to see the character work unspun like this, all for the sake of angst, seemingly.

I also continued to be thrown out by the incompetence of these characters. As I noted in my first review, there is a direct conflict between the types of people we are told Aya and Will are and the ones we see on the page. They aren’t just average spies and fighters; no, they are each at the very top, the Queen’s closest advisors, essentially helping her run the entire country. And, like the first book, I saw none of this skill on the page. Again and again, these characters would blunder through scenarios that should have been well within their skillsets. Worse, they failed to pick up on very obvious plots swirling around them in a way that was, frankly, laughable at times.

The book was also way too long for the amount of plot it contained. Again, there were elements of this plot line that I enjoyed, but there were also numerous instances where things seemed to happen for no real reason. And then were forgotten, with a similar lack of concern to cohesion. This book could have been severely edited down, and I think it would have helped every aspect of the story. A shorter page count would have tightened up the plot and, importantly, limited the page time devoted to the characters brooding.

I think this is it for me and this series. I’m glad I gave it another go, as there have been several instances where I’ve come back to a series or an author and been pleasantly surprised. Unfortunately, the author doubled down on everything that frustrated me about the first book here in the second, killing any interest I might have had in the third. However, if you did enjoy the first one, you’ll likely enjoy this one more than me!

Rating 5: Overly long and lacking in substance, this book didn’t seem to know what to do with its characters other than regress them into brooding messes.

Reader’s Advisory:

“The Curse of Sins” isn’t on any Goodreads lists yet, but it should be on SFF Spy Books.

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Book: “The Witchstone” by Henry H. Neff

Publishing Info: Blackstone Publishing Inc, June 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: NetGalley!

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Book Description: Meet Laszlo, eight-hundred-year-old demon and Hell’s least productive Curse Keeper. From his office beneath Midtown, he oversees the Drakeford Curse, which involves a pathetic family upstate and a mysterious black stone. It’s a sexy enough assignment—colonial origins, mutating victims, et cetera—but Laszlo has no interest in maximizing the curse’s potential; he’d rather sunbathe in Ibiza, quaff martinis, and hustle the hustlers on Manhattan’s subway. Unfortunately, his division has new management, and Laszlo’s ratings are so abysmal that he’s given six days to shape up or he’ll be melted down and returned to the Primordial Ooze.

Meet Maggie Drakeford, nineteen-year-old Curse Bearer. All she’s ever known is the dreary corner of the Catskills where the Drakeford Curse has devoured her father’s humanity and is rapidly laying claim to her own. The future looks hopeless, until Laszlo appears at the Drakeford farmhouse one October night and informs them that they have six days—and six days only—to break the spell before it becomes permanent. Can Maggie trust the glib and handsome Laszlo? Of course not. But she also can’t pass up an opportunity to save her family, even if it means having a demon as a guide …

Thus begins a breakneck international adventure that takes our unlikely duo from a hot dog stand in Central Park to the mountains of Liechtenstein, a five-star hotel in Zurich, and even the time-traveling vault of a demonic crime boss. As the clock ticks down, tough-as-nails Maggie and conniving Laszlo will uncover a secret so profound that what began as a farcical quest to break a curse will eventually threaten the very Lords of Hell.

Review: So, I was feeling fairly positive about this book when I first requested it, as it was one of two, similar-sounding books that I had slotted for review this spring. Unfortunately, the other one was “How to Become the Dark Lord and Die Trying” which…I didn’t love. Even worse, that was the one I had more confidence in simply because I’d read other books by the author that I’d enjoyed. On the other hand, this one was largely an unknown. But I’m happy to report that this one came through in every way I wanted!

There’s so much to love about this book, it’s hard to know where to start! But let’s first touch on the world-building and overall tone of the story. I don’t want this review to turn into a 1:1 comparison between this and “Dark Lord,” but this was one aspect of the storytelling that was starkly different between the two. Where the latter was banging the reader over the head with “jokes,” this one had a much better balance between its humor and the other notes the story was hitting. And, notably, when it was funny, it was actually, you know, funny. There were numerous points where I was laughing out loud, even in the middle of otherwise horrifying scenes. Much of this comes down to Lazlo himself, who was an enigma of narcissism, snobbery, and secretly, a being who cared about those around him, despite himself, almost. He is the kind of character that is just a riot to travel through a story alongside.

But, importantly, while the comedic aspects were on point, the laughs, and Lazlo himself, were counterbalanced by the much more serious “straight man” character, Maggie. It is her story where the heart of the plot really lies, the curse that her family has suffered through, and her determination to finally bring it to an end. She was the perfect foil to Lazlo, as well as an avatar to the reader, seeing this world of demons and magic for the first time as well (curse itself aside).

There were also notable side characters, including a work colleague of Lazlo’s, a demon with a shark’s head, who was frankly hilarious. As well as Maggie’s younger brother, Lump, the sort of encyclopedic “smart kid” character who could have quickly fallen into clichés and not much else. Indeed, when we were first introduced to this character and his gimmick, I pretty much dismissed him. But as the story continued, the author included several very heart-felt scenes between brother and sister that solidified Lump as a fully-realized character in his own right. Even down to the simple, child-like fact that he didn’t like Maggie swearing.

The pacing and plotting were also tight throughout. The story drew me in immediately and we were quickly off to the races, travelling through New York and into Europe to track down the curse-breaking components. However, the action never overwhelmed the character arcs at the heart of the story, and the author always managed to neatly transition from focus to the other. And things ultimately came to a head with a true “final battle” type climax at the end of the book where the fantastical elements became larger-than-life.

I loved this book, and it was such a surprise! This is exactly what I was looking for in the realm of fantasy and comedy combined. Notably, while it was funny, it was also heartfelt, tragic, and touched on the twisted nature of different family dynamics. I definitely recommend this one to pretty much all fantasy fans, especially those who are looking for a good dose of humor in their story.

Rating 9: Fantastic! Fast-paced, hilarious, but full of heart!

Reader’s Advisory:

“The Witchstone” isn’t on any Goodreads lists yet but it should be on Humorous Fantasy Novels.

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Book: “The God and the Gumiho” by Sophie Kim

Publishing Info: Del Rey, June 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from the publisher!

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Book Description: Kim Hani has retired from a life of devouring souls. She is, simply put, too full. Once known as the infamous Scarlet Fox, she now spends her days working in a coffee shop and annoying a particularly irritating, if unfairly handsome, trickster god as often as she can.

That god is Seokga the Fallen. Exiled from the heavenly kingdom of Okhwang, he now begrudgingly resides in the mortal realm, working toward his redemption and suffering through his interactions with the particularly infuriating, if sneakily charming, gumiho barista at his favorite café.

But when a powerful demon escapes from the underworld and threatens to end all of humanity, Okhwang’s emperor offers Seokga an enticing bargain: Kill this rogue creature, as well as the legendary and elusive Scarlet Fox, and he will be reinstated as a god. Hani, however, has no intention of being caught. Seokga might be a trickster god, but she has a trick of her own that he’ll never see coming: teaming up. As Seokga’s assistant, Hani will undermine and sabotage his investigation right under his overly pointy nose. Sure, she’ll help him kill the demon, but she certainly won’t allow him to uncover her secret identity while they’re at it.

As the bickering partners track their case down a path of mayhem and violence, the god and the gumiho find themselves inescapably drawn to each other. But will the unlikely couple stand together to prevent the apocalypse, or will they let their secrets tear them—and the world—apart?

Review: I was very excited when I received an ARC from the publisher for this book! Right off the bat, it has a lot of things going for it: combining urban fantasy and South Korean mythology, and then setting the story in the early 90s. Looking at all of that, it was easy to see that this book was going to be lots of vibes all mashed together. Add in an enemies-to-lovers romance, and yeah, easy to see why I was excited. Let’s get into the full review!

While I had a lot of hopes for this book, it didn’t all come together quite like I wished. But there was still a lot to like about it, and I do think there are many readers out there who will enjoy it. Let’s start with some of the good stuff! I’ve had some exposure to South Korean mythology in other fantasy books, but I’m by no means an expert. In that regard, some of the fantasy elements were just familiar enough that I felt like I understood this world easily, but were still exploring new dynamics and aspects of the mythology that felt completely fresh. Even the familiar elements were twisted into new forms that were intriguing.

I also thought the writing was approachable and easy to read. While I think it was a tad simplistic at times, especially with regards to characterization, it shone as far as pacing and fast-paced storytelling. The reader will be quickly drawn into this world, and the story will catch them up for the ride from there. As a reader who often focuses on characterization above most other elements, it speaks to the readability of the style of writing that I finished this one up fairly quickly even though I wasn’t connecting to the main characters.

Now, as I’ve mentioned, I did struggle with the characters themselves, both separately and as a couple. From the romance angle, I was left wanting right away when I realized that the “enemies” portion of their relationship came from a mess up in a coffee order. Now, I get that this is played for humorous effect, but it just didn’t work for me. We’re talking about centuries-old beings here with untold powers; the fact that they are equally ridiculous about this minor altercation doesn’t speak well of either of them. And it simply wasn’t as funny as it was clearly meant to be.

Things didn’t really improve from there. On one hand, we have a trickster god, and yet I barely ever felt this aspect of his personality. Instead, he was very much the “grumpy” side of the relationship, and the chaos aspect of what I imagine from trickster gods was nowhere to be found. As for Hani, we learn early in the story that she has been in hiding for decades now after committing a mass murder for which she is still being hunted today. We’re told that she is incredibly clever to have avoided capture for so long. But again, right from the beginning, we see her making choices that clearly give away her past. In one notable example, when choosing a weapon, she immediately picks the type of weapon that her wanted identity was most known for using. And, predictably, this is what begins to alert the hero to her past. It’s just…kind of silly. And there were multiple instances of things like this for both characters, where we are told they have certain traits, but the actual choices and behaviors we see on the page directly contradict this. And, again, I could never get past some of the ridiculousness and immaturity of characters are are hundreds of years old.

Overall, this was just an ok read for me. The readability of the style of writing and some of the more fun aspects of the world-building were enough to pull me through this read fairly quickly. But throughout it all, I struggled to connect to these characters or become invested in their love story. If you’re looking for a fresh-feeling urban fantasy, this might be one worth checking out, however!

Rating 7: A fun concept and world were dampened a bit by characters who I found more ridiculous than not most of the time.

Reader’s Advisory:

“The God and the Gumiho” can be found on these Goodreads lists: Asian SSF and Adult SFF by BIPOC Authors.