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Book: “The Knight and the Moth” by Rachel Gillig
Publishing Info: Orbit, May 2025
Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from the publisher!
Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound
Book Description: Sybil Delling has spent nine years dreaming of having no dreams at all. Like the other foundling girls who traded a decade of service for a home in the great cathedral, Sybil is a Diviner. In her dreams she receives visions from six unearthly figures known as Omens. From them, she can predict terrible things before they occur, and lords and common folk alike travel across the kingdom of Traum’s windswept moors to learn their futures by her dreams.
Just as she and her sister Diviners near the end of their service, a mysterious knight arrives at the cathedral. Rude, heretical, and devilishly handsome, the knight Rodrick has no respect for Sybil’s visions. But when Sybil’s fellow Diviners begin to vanish one by one, she has no choice but to seek his help in finding them. For the world outside the cathedral’s cloister is wrought with peril. Only the gods have the answers she is seeking, and as much as she’d rather avoid Rodrick’s dark eyes and sharp tongue, only a heretic can defeat a god.
Review: Some may have noticed that I didn’t review the “One Dark Window” duology back when it came out a few years ago. Well, I tried! But it was one of those book that I just couldn’t get into to, struggling through the entire reading experience. Sometimes I’ll post reviews for books like this if I feel like I have anything constructive to contribute to the conversation or if it’s a title I committed to covering for a publicist. But the rest of time, I usually just pass them by. Well, over the last several years, that duology has exploded in popularity! So much so that I began to question my initial judgement of the book I read. Was I, perhaps, just not in the right mood for it? Did the second book (which I didn’t read) massively improve on the first? People seemed to universally love this series! That being the case, when I saw that Gillig was coming out with her debut adult romantasy title, I was excited to give it a chance! Perhaps I would finally get to hitch a ride on this hype train!
Whelp. Not so much. I really struggled to enjoy this book and was reminded strongly why I didn’t connect with the first one. They both had similar struggles with writing structure and characterization. But let’s start with some positives! The book started on a strong note, with the introduction of this world and the set up for themes regarding religion and prophesy. Some of these initial scenes were incredibly compelling, and it was all the more disappointing seeing some of this early strong work flail under weak characters as the story continued. I also have to give a shout-out to the fun gargoyle companion, the only character who actually seemed to, you know, have a personality? Due to how out-of-step I was with my opinion of Gillig’s other book, I won’t be surprised to find myself on the opposite side of this one as well. But I can almost guarantee that the other reviewers who may, like me, struggle with this book will ALSO love the gargoyle!
I think I would have enjoyed the gargoyle on its own, but it did end up standing out in stark contrast to our main character and the love interest, only highlighting just how little THERE was there for either of them! I couldn’t tell you a single fact about either of these characters, other than things that were strictly having to do with the actual plot points of this story. She is a seer, he is a knight. Yes, yes, and? As we follow Sybil, she was by far the worse of the two. Her “voice,” such as it was, was incredibly bland and dull. This carried over to the romance. We were never given any reason why these two would even like each other, let alone fall in love. It was like reading about to cardboard cut outs of people snark badly at each other and then suddenly declare their deep feelings. Chemistry is a hard thing to peg, but man, when it’s lacking, it’s obvious. And that was definitely the case here!
I was also reminded why I struggled to enjoy the previous book I read by this author. I simply do not enjoy her writing style. There’s a very odd mix of purple prose woven in alongside incredibly modern vernacular. She’s also way too fond of writing incomplete sentences. Every once in a while, this choice can make sense to add emphasis or weight to particular scene or moment. But Gillig uses it constantly and to an overwhelming degree. Here’s a quick example of what I’m talking about: “I shivered. Turned to the gargoyle.” Why not just put an “and” in there? Or simply put a comma after “shivered.” There are many options, but again and again this structure is utilized, making the writing feel choppy and, I think, contributing to the sense of distance I felt from the characters. Often it’s these little style choices that give readers the clues to pick up on the personality of the characters they’re following. And when the writing is choppy and inconsistent, so, too, the characters feel lacking.
The story was also incredibly predictable. And anything the reader couldn’t guess based on any previous exposure to typical fantasy plot points is almost spoon fed to them by the author herself. By the end of the book, I felt like not only had this one followed a familiar structure (very similar to “One Dark Window” in fact) but that I could easily guess the conclusion of the duology as a whole, without even picking up the second book.
I don’t really know how to conclude this review. Obviously, this was a complete miss for me. But I also know that Gillig is a fairly beloved author at this point, and that this book in particular is incredibly hyped in the genre. So, I guess if you’re a huge fan of her previous duology, this one might work for you. However, if you struggled to connect to this author’s style before, this was more of the same, in all of the worst ways.
Rating 5: Choppy sentences, purple prose, and characters who read like wet cardboard; unfortunately, not the book for me.
Reader’s Advisory:
“The Knight and the Moth” can be found on these Goodreads lists: Epic High Fantasy/Romance/Mythology in 2025 and Gothic Fantasy.
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