Serena’s Review: “Upon a Frosted Star”

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Book: “Upon a Frosted Star” by M.A. Kuzniar

Publishing Info: HQ, November 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: from the publisher!

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: When the snow falls, she will be free…

The invitations always arrive the same way – without warning, appearing around the city on the first snowfall of the year, simply inscribed with ‘Tonight.’

When struggling artist, Forster, finds an invitation, he’s bewitched by the magic of the evening, swept up in the glamour of this notorious annual party and intrigued as to who is behind them.

Determined to find out more about the mysterious host, Forster discovers an abandoned manor house silent with secrets and a cursed woman who is desparate to be free…

Review: First of all, thanks to Sophia for reaching out about coverage for this book! Somehow, I had totally missed this title, and it’s one of those books where the cover alone promised that it would be the sort of fantasy novel that I should be checking out! There are big time “Seven Swans”/”Swan Lake” vibes happening here, and both of those are two of my favorite fairytales to start with!

While this one didn’t quite hit all of the highs I had hoped for, there were a couple of strengths I wanted to highlight first. The overall feel of this book was very fairytale-like and romantic, you could almost feel the wintery themes jumping off the page! While it’s still fall here in MN, I can see how this would be a perfect read to cozy up with in the midst of winter.

Another strong point was was the rather simple decision to frame the story from the MMC’s perspective. Honestly, I tend to gravitate towards and prefer stories that follow female main characters, but that also makes it all the more refreshing to read a fantasy story like this that follows the male character instead. For his part, Forster was an intriguing character to follow, and I enjoyed viewing this world through his lens. That said, once he becomes enthralled by Detta, many of his inner monologues became a bit repetitive, all too prone to cycle through pining and complaints about the unfair nature of the situation. Some of this is to be expected, but after a while it also started bogging down the tone and pacing of the story.

The pacing itself was also a bit of a struggle. I enjoyed the set-up of the world, meeting the characters, and the first foray to one of these mysterious parties. But as the plot progressed, many of these things began to feel as if they were spinning their wheels. It all began to feel too repetitive, with some of the chapters between these events feeling like filler. By the end, I was left wondering why so much time was spent on side characters (like Forster’s friends) who really played no major role in story or why, if we’re going to get chapter perspectives from Detta, they were introduced so late in the story.

Overall, I think this book is strong in the wintery vibes of its worlds and in the quality of writing, particularly with regards to the dialogue, which I thought was very well done. However, the actual plotting and some of the characterization felt a bit more wobbly. If you’re a fan of this author’s other book, this one is probably worth checking out. And if you’re looking for a nice wintery story, this might also hit the spot!

Rating 7: The strengths lie in the seasonal tone of the story and the strength of some of the writing, however the pacing and plotting are a bit more hit-and-miss.

Reader’s Advisory:

“Upon a Frosted Star” isn’t on any Goodreads lists, but it should be on Fairytale Like Books.

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