Serena’s Review: “Apprentice to the Villain”

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Book: “Apprentice to the Villain” by Hannah Nicole Maehrer

Publishing Info: Penguin, August 2024

Where Did I Get this Book: ARC from a marketer!

Where Can You Get this Book: WorldCat.org | Amazon | IndieBound

Book Description: From the creator of the viral TikTok videos about the sunshine assistant to the evil villain and their unexpected romance comes the second book in the hotly-anticipated fantasy romance series.

Review: This one might come a bit as a surprise, as I didn’t review the first book when it came out last summer. But I did read it! I just didn’t have that many thoughts to add to the conversation. I mostly thought it was fine, verging on having a lot of potential with some of the snappier moments of writing. With this in mind, I was excited to check this one out when the marketer contacted me about reading and reviewing the sequel this summer! Let’s dive in!

I will say, now that I have read this book, I feel that a review for the first book is even less necessary than it was before! In that, many of my opinions from that book transferred over to this one. This was probably most notable in areas that were frustrating in them both, but some of the aspects that I thought were strengths came even more into their own here. For one thing, I think the writing is very fun and engaging. Even when I was perhaps suppressing an eyeroll or two, I was still compulsively reading at break-neck pace! That was true in the first book and was just as true here. In fact, I’d say the writing improved overall. Most notably, perhaps, I think some of the comedy aspects of this one landed better. (Though, I’ve had a rough summer with comedic fantasy novels, so sometimes I worry that I may just be desperately searching for one that works at all!)

However, I still struggled with the characterization of the female main character, Evie. Look, I enjoyed the “grumpy/sunshine” romance trope as much as the next person, but there is a very fine line between writing a “sunshine”/optimistic character and writing one that comes across as a rather air-headed child. And unfortunately, both in the first book and here, that’s the case for Evie. Some of this comes down to word-choice on the author’s part, often using turns of phrases repeatedly, such as “scrunches her nose,” that does nothing to portray Evie as a serious character. When paired with the romantic hero (generally a better written character, especially in this second book), it leads to a bit of an “ick” factor. If we weren’t given an age, Evie could read like a 13-year old girl with the way she is described and her incredible levels of naivete at points. While I think the more plot-focused approach that this book took helped it some in comparison to the first, I still found myself disappointed by this portrayal, and due to this, the romance itself.

All of this said, I know that the first book was wildly popular, and as this one is much of the same, I have no doubt that it, too, will be well-received. If you’re looking for tight plotting or deeper character arcs, I don’t think this series is for you. But if you’re wanting a fast, at times quite fun, ride than you might enjoy this.

Rating 7: If you enjoyed the first book, this one will be for you. But many of my personal struggles there carried over here as well, particularly with regards to the child-like characterization of the heroine.

Reader’s Advisory:

“Assistant to the Villain” can be found on these Goodreads lists: In Her Villain Era and Witchy Fall Vibes

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